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"First, let me just say that the first story is hot. I'll even go so far as to say Smokin' Hot. It's short, but it packs a nice punch...As for the writing elements, the plot is creative and different and I enjoyed it. The pacing is fine, prose and dialogue are well done, character development is good for the short story we are given, and world-building is well done and gives us a different take of the world of vampires...I enjoyed "Blood Slave" and I recommend it for those who appreciate the idea of consenting to be a slave, but then losing the ability to withdraw consent once it is given...I would be very interested in a full length novel written in this world."
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